User talk:Pi4t

Welcome
Hi, welcome to Scourge of Undeath Wiki! Thanks for your edit to the 209 page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! -- Laurence &quot;Cerulean&quot; (Talk) 19:42, January 9, 2010

Thanks for your good work to the book. Just a couple of continuity notes: please refer to STAMINA and whatever in capital letters in writing and do speech with "", not , just so it's all the same since I will copy to a word document at the end.

I may go back to all the references we've written and pad them out a bit more, to build up the atmosphere. We're going for the best gamebook ever written. Also, I've thought about making it over 1000 references long (split into 3 distinct sections, the middle being this one), I've always wanted to hold a world record!

Thanks, and continue writing the quest! --Laurence &quot;Cerulean&quot; 12:30, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

If you think that anything is inappropriate just edit it, sometimes I'm not very good at controlling the quality of my writing.

Thanks for the heads up about 196, I finished Blackhammer. Do you like my work? I'm now writing the path to Gnarkton, are you ok writing the Konigsforst? Literally dark forest in german. I really want to build up the atmosphere here, you can mastermind the encounters!

You may want to make some of those bandit combats a little easier, remember that we can have a Skill as low as 6 at this point! -Laurence &quot;Cerulean&quot; 12:30, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Which altered page do you speak of?

I like your cave style, it's cool to be able to complete the quest without a fight. We should definitely take it that way.

Konigsforst is an obstacle on the way to gnarkton. The book will push you towards it.

--Laurence &quot;Cerulean&quot; 22:15, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

lol, it says that only you edited that page. I think we should just make this a two part project, any others now could screw up our ideas for the book. Both main paths will eventually lead back to reference 200 where more background will be given and there will be a choice of like 4 interesting places to go to.

I left it open since it will take you to a random part of the Konigsforst in the end, captured by Headhunters.

Ok. You can take the forest however you want. You could try building up some atmosphere that just doesn't really go anywhere in the end (keep referring to it as dead and dark etc). Or you could emphasise the fact that there is one good route through. You could even have some kindly wood elves there or something. It may be worth drawing up a crude map beforehand. --Laurence &quot;Cerulean&quot; 16:32, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Woops, it does! Not that it makes any difference to the story ;)--Laurence &quot;Cerulean&quot; 09:07, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

I'll find some good puzzles, I want several of these in the story. Personally I love them. Here's one for the plant:

"The day before yesterday I was 25 and next year I turn 28. This is true only one day in a year. What day is my birthday? Go to the page reference corresponding to the day+the month (so january 3rd would be 1+3 = turn to 4)"

(the answer is 43, riddle is true when the plant is born Dec 31st and says the riddle on jan 1st) Laurence &quot;Cerulean&quot; 16:03, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Ah well, a talking puzzling plant is still cool Laurence &quot;Cerulean&quot; 21:31, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

update
Hi pi4t. I guess you're referring to page 335 where you get a stamina bonus. Please feel free to change it (and indeed anything else), that's perfectly fine by me. I think we've used up something like 170 references. That 1000 target looks a long way off...